tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post4584008353900908189..comments2023-09-09T01:04:58.324-07:00Comments on The Steuart Station: Celebrating Our WritingSherri Steuarthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11410686153735710173noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-39269454667666230992014-04-23T09:50:04.482-07:002014-04-23T09:50:04.482-07:00Group 7: I loved how you all sounded enthusiastic ...Group 7: I loved how you all sounded enthusiastic about accomplishing your dreams. I also liked how you all have different ways to explain something that is very important to you. I enjoyed how Reagan's title, "THE VOICE OF INSPIRATION", encourages me to keep going and it doesn't give the story away, but still informs the reader.Nastiahttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-47257215410712117502014-04-23T09:45:24.622-07:002014-04-23T09:45:24.622-07:00Group 7: I think Jack's writing used lots of j...Group 7: I think Jack's writing used lots of juicy words like ''when you skate on the ice you feel as free as a bird''. Gagehttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-49658155401565819302014-04-23T09:32:04.644-07:002014-04-23T09:32:04.644-07:00Group 1: I like how you used "spotlight"...Group 1: I like how you used "spotlight" in your title and used it in your ending. It tied everything up in the end.You also used descriptive words like chant, tingle and prickle.Calebhttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-56550749344571900692014-04-23T09:30:09.712-07:002014-04-23T09:30:09.712-07:00Group 7: I like how Brook-lynn used juicy vocabula...Group 7: I like how Brook-lynn used juicy vocabulary and description like: prickle, shiver and tingle.Mackenzeehttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-28868386649787372482014-04-23T09:23:29.505-07:002014-04-23T09:23:29.505-07:00group 7: i like how brook-lynn used lovely flowing...group 7: i like how brook-lynn used lovely flowing words like ; prickle shiver and chant cheyhttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-16835145798923384522014-04-23T09:14:59.587-07:002014-04-23T09:14:59.587-07:00Group7: I like how they used lots of elaboration i...Group7: I like how they used lots of elaboration in their sentences. I also like that they used lovely language like in Brooklyn's ending paragraph. I like how she said "the spotlight is on you".Aidanhttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-7341377288455198192014-04-23T09:12:16.753-07:002014-04-23T09:12:16.753-07:00Group 5: Rylan- I like the line "It is like a...Group 5: Rylan- I like the line "It is like a trampoline of determination" I like this line because is uses descriptive words like "trampoline" and "determination".Lisahttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-63727919073999238952014-04-23T09:08:13.455-07:002014-04-23T09:08:13.455-07:00Group 7: I think Brooklyn did a great job describi...Group 7: I think Brooklyn did a great job describing what dreams are when she said "when you have a dream you feel a tingle in your heart, a shiver right through your body, your feet start to prickle and your heart starts to beat like a drum". I think this line really explains what it feels like to dream. I also think she did a good job at spicing her writing up.Rylanhttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-76943552650762430992014-04-23T09:06:32.794-07:002014-04-23T09:06:32.794-07:00Group 6: Gage really used descriptive language and...Group 6: Gage really used descriptive language and used a metaphor "you bounce back up on a trampoline of determination."Jackhttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-88775540387909368582014-04-23T08:44:47.486-07:002014-04-23T08:44:47.486-07:00Group2: Taylar- I like how your title is short and...Group2: Taylar- I like how your title is short and it rhymes which makes it fun to read.Benhttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-30028870686021412682014-04-23T08:29:34.401-07:002014-04-23T08:29:34.401-07:00Group 1: Kyle - I like how you got the idea from R...Group 1: Kyle - I like how you got the idea from Rylan when you said - "To bounce back up". Good writers pick up different ideas from each other. I also like how Caleb got an idea from me when I said - "Put the pedal to the metal". Caydenhttp://strathmillan.sjsd.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-28125988046517830412014-04-21T07:21:41.834-07:002014-04-21T07:21:41.834-07:00Wow! What a great way to share your writing with ...Wow! What a great way to share your writing with each other and with parents! We love that you are thinking critically about writing, using creative and descriptive words, and drawing word pictures with metaphors and similes. Thanks for sharing your dreams with us! <br /><br />Judith & Arlyn Friesen EppAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03393715876710545500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-79703359336593559382014-04-20T13:06:40.671-07:002014-04-20T13:06:40.671-07:00Great job Room 14! Loved listening to your 'd...Great job Room 14! Loved listening to your 'dreams' and I hope one day they all come true!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08790240873612753108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8543970415845278834.post-65205690720696365162014-03-27T15:55:17.712-07:002014-03-27T15:55:17.712-07:00Excellent writing! I enjoyed hearing your voices ...Excellent writing! I enjoyed hearing your voices describe what you liked best. Keep up the fantastic work!S. Shortenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10122724004871763972noreply@blogger.com